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第23章 模板作文赏析(7)

There is some truth in both arguments.But it is Iikely to do more harm than good,if you maintain that it is the only thing to do at that night.Some more meaningful things can be found easily,such as parties,sharing views with families,etc..Obviously,there is little doubt that further attention will be paid on this issue.

(2006.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会生活类话题的利弊议论文。按照提纲的要求此篇文章分了三个部分。文章有许多闪光点,在套用模板的基础上有所突破。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的闪光点,使文章的内容更加生动。

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1.First,they think that_________.

2.What’more,some feel that_________.

3.But others do not agree.

4.Moreover,they argue that_________.

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Some people are in favor of_________.Those who Iike it_________.First,they think that_________.What‘more,some feel that_________.Besides,it is said that_________.

But others do not agree.Firstly,they say that_________.Moreover,they argue that_________.

There is some truth in both arguments.But it is Iikely to_________.Some more meaningful things_________,such as_________Obviously,there is Iittle doubt that_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Students selecting their Iecturers.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given below.

1.有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师。

2.学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素。

3.学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题。

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Students selecting their lecturers

Nowadays,there is a general discussion today about the issue of some changes on campus.Particularly,students in universities have optional choices on their teachers.

A number of factors are responsible for decisions in choosing teachers.For one thing,the character of a lecturer plays a significant role in this issue,which means the teacher should meet the learners’taste.For another thing,opinions from other students are likely to bring effects on the decision.In other words,we are possibly influenced by negative or positive words from others.

Obviously,there is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of this matter.On the one hand,students are treated better than before.On the other hand,some top teachers will be ignored,if they are not able to please the market.From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that further attention will be paid to this matter.

(2006.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇现象评论类议论文。由于提纲所给的框架十分清晰,此文开篇就引出了该现象。第二段陈述了选择老师时所考虑的因素,使用了For one thing……For another thing……In other words……这样此段落中心突出,层次分明。最后一段指出了该做法的好处以及可能的问题,语言的概括性也恰到好处。文中用黑体标出的句子是作文中常用到的可以使文章结构清楚的句式。

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1.A number of factors are responsible for_________.

2.In other words,_________.

3.Obviously,there is no consensus_________.

4.From what has been discussed above,we may_________.

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Nowadays,there is_________.Particularly,_________.

A number of factors are responsible for_________.For one thing,_________.For another thing,_________.In other words,_________.

Obviously,there is no consensus_________.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.From what has been discussed above,we may_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given below:

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点。

2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同。

3.我认为……

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Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

Nowadays,some famous universities have become a hot tourist attraction.Many middle school students and ordinary tourists swarm into university campuses such as Beijing University and Qinghua University.They can enjoy the intellectual atmosphere there and also be a part of them.

When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists,different people hold different views.Some argue that since most universities belong to the country,every citizen has a right to visit them.What‘s more,middle school students can have a good impression of the universities,which will set a definite goal for themselves.However,other people maintain that the visitors will distract the attention of teachers and students in universities;therefore,their visit should be banned.

As I see it,the visit brings people both benefits and harms.We should open most parts of universities to visitors;meanwhile,some private or important parts should not be opened.Only in this way can we satisfy both tourists and universities.

(2005.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇个人观点议论文。首先第一段指出了普遍存在的现象即名校校园正成为旅游新热点,很多游客喜欢去那里观光。第二段谈论了两种不同的观点,指出了校园开放既有利也有弊。第三段提出了自己的观点,并指出如何解决这个问题。以only引起的倒装句作为结尾句,更能加强语气,突出自己的观点。文中用黑体标出的句子均为各段的主题句,起到了点睛的作用。

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1.Nowadays,_________have become a hot_________.

2.When it comes to_________,different people hold different views.

3.Some argue that_________.

4.However,other people maintain that_________;therefore,_________.

5.As I see it,_________.

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Nowadays,_________have become_________.They can enjoy_________there and also_________.

When it comes to_________,different people hold different views.Some argue that_________.What’s more,_________.However,other people maintain that_________;therefore,_________.

As I see it,_________.We should_________;meanwhile,_________.Only in this way can we satisfy both_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?The first sentence has already been written for you.You should write at Ieast 100words,and base your competition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……

2.也有人持不同意见,……

3.我的看法和打算。

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Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?