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Volunteers Needed

A voluntary activity in the summer vacation will be organized by the University Students Union.The Student Union will open free English classes for the youngsters in S.O.S Children’s Village.The classes will Iast for a week.

Currently,we will recruit 5volunteers to work as English teachers.The volunteers are requested to speak fluent English.Those with English teaching experience are preferable.Besides the English skills,we expect the volunteers to be patient,open-minded with a loving heart.The Children’s Village will provide the volunteers with three meals a day and transportation from and to the university during the class days.

Those who are interested in taking part in the activity,please send your resume to the email address [email protected] before June 30th.The office of the Student Union will contact the chosen candidates for an interview before July 10th.

(2006.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇告示类应用文。范文共分了三个部分,文章中心明确,内容完整,语言表达贴切。文中用黑体标出的句子非常精彩地描述了报名者条件,为文章增加了的亮点。

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1.Currently,we will_________.

2.Besides_________,we expect_________.

3.Those who are interested in taking part in_________,please send your resume to the email address_________before_________.

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_________in the summer vacation will be organized by_________.The Student Union will_________.

Currently,we will_________._________are requested to_________.Those with_________are preferable.Besides_________,we expect_________.

_________will provide_________with three meals a day and transportation from and to the university during_________.

Those who are interested in taking part in_________,please send your resume to the email address_________before_________.The office of the Student Union will contact the chosen candidates for an interview before_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a Campaign Speech.You should write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会主席的工作。

2.如果当选,你将为本校同学做些什么。

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A Campaign Speech

Good morning,Ladies and gentlemen!

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the Students Union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university,I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates,and my classmates and my teachers all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I Iike to help others.Moreover,I have a variety of hobbies,for example,playing basketball,playing football,playing table tennis,etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.

If I become the president,I will try my best to do well.I will organize some suitable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well.I sincerely hope you will give me a chance,and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you!

(2005.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇竞选演说辞。根据提纲的要求分成两个段落。文章的主体句。

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1.Today I am very glad to run for_________.

2.Moreover,I have_________,for example,_________.

3.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.

4.If I become_________,I will try my best to do well.

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_________,

Today I am very glad to run for_________.I am junior in_________.Since I came into_________,I have always been_________.I have done_________.I am good at_________.And I Iike to_________.Moreover,I have_________,for example,_________.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.

If I become_________,I will try my best to do well.I will_________.I will do many things_________.I sincerely hope you will give me a chance,and please believe me that I will be a good_________.Thank you!

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at Ieast 120words according to the following guidelines:

Your role:a tour guide

Your audience:a group of foreign tourists

Your introduction should include:

●some welcoming words

●the schedule for the day

●a deion of the place the tourists will be visiting

(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site,etc.)

You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.

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A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Welcome to Beijing,to begin with,it is my pleasure to have this chance to be your guide and show you around this beautiful city.

The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Badaling Great Wall.The next sign to look around is the nearby Great-Wall-of-China Museum as well as the Great Wall National Theater,and you can get a whole view of it.And the last is Beijing Tiananmen Square.

The Great Wall,as the very symbol of ancient Chinese engineering,it may traces for more than 5000kilometers.It is regarded as one of the few world wonder.What we will visit today is the Badaling Great Wall.Among all the sections of the Great wall,Badaling is considered most impressive for its magnificent view and historic significance.And in 1987,it was assessed as“World Cultural Heritage”by the United Nations.All the Chinese people are proud of that.

Thank you for Iistening.I hope you enjoy yourselves today!

(2004.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于景点介绍的导游辞。文章内容完整,结构合理,层层推进。文中用黑体标出的段落是比较经典的日程安排模板,结构层次很清晰。

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1.It is my pleasure to_________.

2.The following is schedule of the day.

3.The first spot we are going to visit_________.

4.The next sign to Iook around is_________.

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Ladies and Gentlemen/Dear,

Welcome to_________.It is my pleasure to_________.

The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit_________.The next sign to Iook around is_________.And the Iast is_________.

_________as the very symbol of_________.It is regarded as_________._________,_________is considered most impressive for_________.All the Chinese people are proud of that.