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第33章 模板作文赏析(17)

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education?You should write at Ieast 100words,and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决。

2.哪种途径适合于我。(说明理由)

范文欣赏

How I Finance My College Education?

Several years ago new tuition fee policy was put into practice and college students were asked to pay a certain sum of money.And now,all the students,no matter what subjects they are engaged in,must pay for tuition.

There are many ways for a student to finance his college education.On the one hand,most students ask their parents to pay the tuition fee and pay for their books,accommodation and other cost.On the other hand,a student can also apply for the scholarship.Most universities set up scholarship to offer money to the poor students who do well in entrance exams and reward those who do well in entrance exams and reward those who work well at university.In addition to the above,taking part-time jobs is also a common way for a college student to get money to pay part of his tuition and fees.

So far as I‘m concerned,I’d prefer earning the scholarship.This means I must study hard and be a top student,which has always been my goal.After all,the task of a student is to study.And in addition to solving my financial problems,getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my future.

(2000.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇有关校园生活的说明文。根据所给的提纲,首先指出现在上大学需要缴纳学费。第二段具体阐述了如何解决学费的问题,并列举了几种方法进行说明,层次很分明。第三段指出自己的观点,提出建设性的总结。结尾这段文字连贯性比较好,能给人留下深刻的印象。文中用黑体标出的句子是经典的作文模板句式,适于背诵。

句型模板

1.On the one hand,_________.

2.On the other hand,_________.

3.In addition to the above,_________.

4.So far as I‘m concerned,_________.

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Several years ago_________.And now,_________.

There are many ways for_________.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.In addition to the above,_________.

So far as I’m concerned,_________.This means_________.After all,_________.And in addition to_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Harmfulness of Fake Commodities.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?

2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。

范文欣赏

Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

Nowadays there are a Iot of fake commodities on the market.They range from daily commodities to expensive goods.They have caused many harms in society.

First,fake commodities damage the consumers‘interests.In addition,fake commodities affect businessmen and manufacturers,too.Those who have been deceived will be reluctant to consume,which will make business slack.Worst of all,some fake commodities such as medicine,gas cylinder and electric devices will endanger people’s Iives and social security.

There are many ways to eliminate fake commodities but the following ones may be effective.First,the Iaws of the protection of consumers should be enforced to severely punish those who produce or sell fake commodities.Second,consumers should be taught how to tell good commodities from fake ones.Third,they should be advised to protect their own interests and not to be Ied astray by false advertisements.

In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of fake commodities and Iaunch a campaign against them.Only in this way will fake commodities be possibly eliminated from the market in the future.

(1998.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。首先引出了这种假冒伪劣商品充斥市场的现象,及这些商品存在的原因。文章内容完整,主题明确。文中用黑体标出的倒装句为文章结尾做了点睛之笔。

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1.Nowadays there are a Iot of_________.

2.In addition,_________.

3.In a word,the whole society should_________.

4.Only in this way_________.

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Nowadays there are a Iot of_________.They have caused many harms in society.First,_________.In addition,_________.Worst of all,_________.

There are many ways_________.First,_________.Second,_________.Third,_________.

In a word,the whole society should_________.Only in this way_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Advantage of Job Interview.You should write at Ieast 120words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.现在找工作一般都要面试,通过面试,面试者(interviewer)和应试者(interviewee)可以互相了解情况。

2.面试者可以向应试者介绍情况,如工作性质、条件、待遇等。

3.应试者也有机会给对方留下一个好的印象,如可以表现出自信心,可以介绍教育背景,工作能力等。

范文欣赏

Advantage of Job Interview

When looking for a job,you will most likely have a job interview first.This seems to be in fashion now.Through the interview the interviewer and the interviewee can talk face to face,which provides a way for them to know each other better.

On the one hand,the interviewer can introduce the main aspects of the job opening to the interviewee,such as the specific requirements for the job,the working conditions,and the wages and benefits the interviewee will get.

On the other hand,the interviewee also has a chance to give the employer a good impression.He can talk with confidence and show the interviewer how well he is educated and how good his working ability is.And it will be better if he emphasizes that this is the very job he wants and he won’t cast an eye on any other jobs.The interviewer will most probably be moved.

Through the job interview,people who Iook for a job will have a better chance of getting a good one and those who need people to do a job will have a better chance of finding someone that is qualified.

(1995.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会热点的说明文。范文根据提纲首先说明现在找工作面试是一种趋势;而且通过面试双方可以互相了解情况。第二段主要点出了通过面试,面试者可以向应试者介绍一些工作方面的情况。第三段主要说明应试者也可以向面试者展现一下自己的情况,以便给他留下好印象。最后一段再次点明了面试的重要性。文中用黑体标出的句子是每一段落的主题句,也是此文章的骨干句。

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1.This seems to be in fashion now.

2.On the one hand,_________,such as_________.

3.On the other hand,_________.