书城外语四级写作速成的秘密:3个月写出好成绩
48281500000039

第39章 模板作文赏析(23)

The well-known proverb_________has Iong been accepted by all of us.It tells us that_________.

Let’s take_________as an example._________.

Another good case in point is_________._________.

Judging from the examples given above,we may safely come to the conclusion that_________.So why not_________?

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Money makes the mare go.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.钱是万能的吗?

2.人们各有不同看法。

3.你的观点。

范文欣赏

Money makes the mare go

As the saying goes,“Money makes the mare go”,but there are many things we can‘t buy with money,such as time and true love.

What is money?To this question,different people hold differently.Some think money is the source of happiness,while some regard it as the root of all evils.As far as I am concerned,they both have their reasons those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house,beautiful clothes,or Iuxurious cars,and can enable them and their families Iive comfortably.They even believe that money can bring power,friendship,and Iove.But due to the temptation of money,there are many people who become thieves,robbers,or murderers.For example,it is also out of the greed for money that some officials forget their duty and cause enormous Iosses to the country,so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money.

In fact,money is merely a medium of exchange.It may bring you happiness;it may lead you to a life of crime.Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示部分赞同的文章。文章中心明确,语言优美,结构清晰,用词准确。文中用黑体标出的句子是各段落的主题句,引导着文章的中心思想。

句型模板

1.As the saying goes,_________,but there are_________,such as_________.

2.To this question,different people hold differently.

3.Those who_________argue that_________.

全文模板

Topic

As the saying goes,_________,but there are_________,such as_________.

What is_________?To this question,different people hold differently.Some think_________,while some_________.As far as I am concerned,they both have their reasons.Those who_________argue that_________.They even believe that_________.But_________,there are many people who_________.For example,_________,so some people think that_________.

In fact,_________.It may_________;it may_________.Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Early Bird Catches the Worm.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.“早起的鸟有虫吃”是大家熟悉的谚语。

2.为什么这么说?

范文欣赏

Early Bird Catches the Worm

“Early bird catches the worm”is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with.I fully agree with it and its implication,in my mind,it can be justified in three respects.

First,it takes time to accomplish a task-the earlier you begin,the more likely you will reach your goal earlier.Otherwise you can never be sure of your success.Second,when diligence becomes a habit,nothing will be difficult to a determined and persistent person.For example,you will never feel bored and tired at doing social investigation if you really enjoy it.Third,Iooking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that social resources are always Iimited and opportunities are always for those prepared minds.

Living in an age when most people are intelligent,diligence seems more than necessary.As the modern competition becomes more and more fierce,we should realize the importance of early beginning.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。首先点出此谚语被人们所熟知,并表明自己完全同意此观点,第二句是过渡句,运用得很好。第二段阐述的理由包括:行动越早,就越有可能达到自己的目标;养成勤奋的好习惯,就没什么困难了;社会资源和机会都是有限的。末段总结指出,社会竞争越来越激烈,我们会意识到提前开始的重要性。文中用黑体标出的句子比较精彩,为文章增添了亮点。

句型模板

1._________is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with.

2.First,it takes time to accomplish a task-_________.

3.Third,Iooking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that_________.

全文模板

Topic

_________is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with.I fully agree with it and its implication,in my mind,can be justified in three respects.

First,it takes time to accomplish a task-_________.Second,_________.Third,Iooking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that_________.

Living in an age when_________.As_________,we should_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There Is a Will There Is a Way.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。

2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。

3.学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才。

范文欣赏

Where There Is a Will There Is a Way

One of the most important things to succcss is a firm resolution.A great man is al ways one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit.One will never succeed all his Iife without a firm will to get the final victory.

As a rule,great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will.For example,Dr.Sun Yatsen set the Chinese people free from the rule of the Qing Dynasty through a Iong period of hard struggle.Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed,but he had an inflexible spirit and sticked to his cause.Finally,he made the revolution of 1911a success.

On the one hand,a student who has no resolution will never succeed in his studies.On the other hand,the same is true of men in all walks of Iife.We must have a firm resolution first,if we wish to succeed.We must always remember the old saying that where there is a will there is a way.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。按照提纲共分为三段,第一段点出坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。第二段通过举例来说明意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命。第三段指出没有坚强意志的学生在学习上也不会成功,并对全文进行了总结。最后一句话点明了标题,并与之相呼应。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的主题句,也是骨干句。

句型模板

1.For example,_________.