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Nevertheless,no matter what job you will choose,it will be more challenging.With the economical development and the social progress,science and technology will become more and more important.As for me,I will choose scientist as my career.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有说明的成分又有个人观点的表达。文章结构紧凑,内容完整,紧扣主题,语言流畅。文中用黑体标出的句子写得比较精彩,为文章增加了亮点。

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1.It goes without saying that_________.

2.It can be easily proved that_________.

3.One thing worthy of noting is that_________.

4.Nevertheless,no matter_________.

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It goes without saying that_________._________from the graph.According to it,_________.

It can be easily proved that_________.What is more,_________.Boys consider working_________.It is true that_________.One thing worthy of noting is that_________.This shows that_________.

Nevertheless,no matter_________.As for me,I will_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:Changes in College Students’Ways of Spending Summer Vacation.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

A.staying at home B.traveling C.doing social investigation D.other ways

1.根据上图描述大学生过暑假方式的变化情况。

2.分析产生这些变化的原因。

3.给出个人对这种变化趋势的预测。

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Changes in College Students‘Ways of Spending Summer Vacation

From the two charts,we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations during vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.

There are several reasons for the changes.Firstly,with the development of economy,many people have become better off.Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling.Secondly,tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years.Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited.In addition,the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world.In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graduation.

From the changes in the charts,we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有趋势预测。根据提纲要求分成了三个部分,不错的文章。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的主体句,也是骨干句。

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1.From the two charts,we can see that_______________.

2.There are several reasons for the changes.

3.From the changes in the charts,we can predict that___________.

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From the two charts,we can see that_______________.

There are several reasons for the changes.Firstly,_______.Secondly,_______.In addition,_______.

From the changes in the charts,we can predict that___________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Cards.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:

1.现代城市中持卡的人越来越多。

2.原因在于……

3.其发展趋势是……

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Cards

According to the chart,it is clear that holding various cards has become a common part of people’s life.The chart shows over 80%people in big cities hold various kinds of cards.In small-sized and middle-sized cities,there are over 50%and 70%people using cards respectively.Many reasons contribute to the phenomenon.

To begin with,the convenience brought by the cards plays a very important role.It is easier and simpler for people to take several cards than to take a Iarge amount of cash with them.Moreover,many cards can be used whenever and wherever they want.In addition,comparatively,using cards are safer than using cash.As a result,holding cards,especially among the youth,gradually becomes a vogue in recent years.

As to me,I think that cards have a bright future.First of all,some multi-functional cards are emerging,which will make us find that one card in hand is enough some day.Besides,with the development of science and technology,cards will become much safer and easier in the process of using.To conclude,more people will incline to use cards.

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有趋势预测。首先指出现代城市中持卡的人越来越多这一现象,又简单介绍了图表中各种城市的持卡率。文章语言简洁,主题明确,短小精悍。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的主题句,引导着文章的中心思想。

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1.According to the chart,it is clear that_______.

2.The chart shows_______.

3.Many reasons contribute to_______.

4.As a result,_______.

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According to the chart,it is clear that_______.The chart shows_______.Many reasons contribute to_______.

To begin with,_________.Moreover,_________.In addition,_________.As a result,_______.

As to me,I think_________.First of all,_________.Besides,_________.To conclude,_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Changes in the Ownership of Houses.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:

1.根据下图描述该市住房产权的变化。

2.分析产生这些变化的原因。

3.说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。

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Changes in the Ownership of Houses

From the chart,we can see clearly that in this big city,state-owned houses declined abruptly from 75%in 1990to 60%in 1995and then to 20%in 2000,while private houses rose from 25%to 40%and then to 80%during the same period.

Two reasons,in my mind,can account for the fundamental changes in the ownership of houses.On the one hand,the housing reform is one of the most important urban economic reforms and the old system of house distribution is replaced by individual purchase of real estate.On the other hand,as the income Ievel goes up,people want to Iive in Iarger and more comfortable houses.